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2018年12月1日雅思考試寫作考到科技類話題,一起來(lái)看看這類話題該怎么寫?
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題目:Some people believe that spending money on developing technology for space exploration is not justified, there are more beneficial ways to spend money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
題目分析:本次題目是科學(xué)與技術(shù)中的太空探索話題,太空探索是否值得一直以來(lái)廣受爭(zhēng)議。原因大致可歸納為:其一,需要投入大量的人力物力財(cái)力;其二,沒有與人類切身利益直接相關(guān)。這道題目是同意不同意類別的題目,所以這里分別給出大家這兩個(gè)角度的觀點(diǎn)。
1.認(rèn)為花太多資金用于發(fā)展太空技術(shù)是不合理的(同意)
(1)太空對(duì)于大部分人來(lái)說(shuō)還是比較遙遠(yuǎn)的存在,所以政府投資太多用于發(fā)展太空技術(shù)是無(wú)法令群眾感到立刻就能夠受益的。
(2)資金應(yīng)該花在刀刃上,現(xiàn)在貧富差距這么大,不如用來(lái)解決改善貧富差距的問(wèn)題上,而不是用在不太急的太空探索上。
2.認(rèn)為太多資金用于發(fā)展太空技術(shù)是合理的(不同意)
(1)用在發(fā)展太空技術(shù)方面的資金是合理的,所以這部分資金并沒有耽誤各個(gè)方面的建設(shè),民生問(wèn)題是大問(wèn)題,就算是要解決,也不能夠一蹴而就的。
(2)發(fā)展太空技術(shù)是能夠?yàn)槿祟愒旄5?,比如GPS的普及。所以長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)來(lái)看,使用一部分資金發(fā)展太空技術(shù)還是有必要的。
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范文1的思路是這樣的:
首先陳述反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn),然后用兩個(gè)段落指出太空探索帶來(lái)的好處,最后總結(jié)觀點(diǎn),認(rèn)為處理好國(guó)內(nèi)問(wèn)題固然重要,但太空探索帶來(lái)的便利和好處也證明其自身的價(jià)值。
(背景句)Since the early years of the Space Race, space exploration has been synonymous with overt displays of geopolitical power, with nations from the USA, the USSR and more recently India viewing space technology as an assertion of national prowess and strength.(改寫題目)However, critics contend that the cost of such extravagant displays of political power is needless, particularly in the current time of economic slowdown and rising inequality.(立場(chǎng)和個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))In my opinion, the profits and convenience we enjoyed by the development of space exploration can even go beyond our imaginations.
自早期太空競(jìng)賽以來(lái),太空探索一直是公開彰顯地緣政治實(shí)力的代名詞,美國(guó)、蘇聯(lián)以及最近的印度等國(guó)家,都將太空技術(shù)視為判定國(guó)家實(shí)力的一種方法。然而,批評(píng)人士認(rèn)為,用這種奢侈的方法顯示政治權(quán)利毫無(wú)必要,尤其當(dāng)前面臨經(jīng)濟(jì)放緩和不平等日益突出。我認(rèn)為, 我們享受到由發(fā)展太空探索帶來(lái)的好處和便利甚至超出我們的想象。
(觀點(diǎn))Critics contend that the vast sums of money spent on the funding of long space missions indicate a poor sense of priorities, given the immense social challenges some "Space Race" nations face domestically.(解釋觀點(diǎn))As wealth inequality grows across the world, it is increasingly being argued that governments should direct a greater share of the national budget to address these problems.(進(jìn)一步例子解釋)Many social problems caused by economic inequality deserve to give more attention and efforts than space exploration.(結(jié)論)Therefore, opponents claim that space exploration should not be a major priority.
批評(píng)人士認(rèn)為,考慮到一些“太空競(jìng)賽”國(guó)家面臨的巨大社會(huì)挑戰(zhàn),花費(fèi)巨額資金資助長(zhǎng)期的太空任務(wù)未免有些本末倒置。隨著全球財(cái)富不均日益加劇,越來(lái)越多的人認(rèn)為,各國(guó)政府應(yīng)將更多國(guó)家預(yù)算用于解決這些問(wèn)題。由經(jīng)濟(jì)不平等造成的許多社會(huì)問(wèn)題比太空探索更值得關(guān)注和努力。因此,反對(duì)者認(rèn)為空間探索不應(yīng)是一個(gè)優(yōu)先事項(xiàng)。
(觀點(diǎn))Nevertheless, space exploration does bring great benefits to human directly and indirectly.(解釋觀點(diǎn))pace exploration has the potential to deepen humanity's understanding of the universe and, in turn, our understanding of how our own world works.(進(jìn)一步例子解釋)Further, it may be the case in the future that space technicians and scientists are able to develop ways in which minerals from outer space can be harnessed to provide benefits to Earth.(細(xì)節(jié))It has already been revealed that both Mars and the Moon harbour large water and mineral reserves, which, if responsibly and successfully exploited could provide a major boost on our own planet.
然而,太空探索確實(shí)給人類帶來(lái)了直接和間接的巨大利益。太空探索有可能加深人類對(duì)宇宙的理解,反之增進(jìn)人類對(duì)世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)原理的理解。此外,未來(lái)空間技術(shù)人員和科學(xué)家可能能夠開發(fā)出利用外層空間的礦物造福地球的方法。人們已經(jīng)發(fā)現(xiàn),火星和月球都蘊(yùn)藏著大量的水和礦物資源,如果能夠合理有效地利用這些資源,就能夠極大地促進(jìn)地球的發(fā)展。
(觀點(diǎn))Although the resources of outer space need further exploration, the advanced technologies developed in the process are now directly and indirectly bringing benefits to our day-to-day life, such as the weather satellites, communication satellite, GPS satellite, etc.(例子)Weather satellites help us track developing hurricanes, allowing meteorologists to warn people days in advance, while communication satellites allow people instant access to information all over the world using radio, television, and phones.(另外的例子)In terms of GPS satellites, they can track ships, airplanes, and even people who may be lost or in need of help.(結(jié)論)The services contributed by these technologies are so closely related with us that people have already taken them as part of life.
雖然外層空間的資源需要進(jìn)一步探索,但在此過(guò)程中開發(fā)出來(lái)的先進(jìn)技術(shù),如氣象衛(wèi)星、通信衛(wèi)星、GPS衛(wèi)星等,正直接或間接地造福于我們的日常生活。氣象衛(wèi)星幫助人們追蹤成型的颶風(fēng),并允許氣象學(xué)家事先做出預(yù)警,而通訊衛(wèi)星能讓人們能及時(shí)使用無(wú)線電、電視和電話即時(shí)獲取世界各地的信息。至于GPS衛(wèi)星,它可以追蹤船只、飛機(jī)、甚至可能走失或需要幫助的人。這些技術(shù)提供的服務(wù)于我們息息相關(guān),人們已經(jīng)把它們作為生活的一部分。
(個(gè)人傾向)For my part, I agree with the fundamental notion that space exploration can provide benefits to mankind and that these benefits have not yet been fully understood. It is certainly important for the government to direct national budgets at the pressing matters, such as welfare and income redistribution,but the fact that space exploration benefits human in differ scopes has proved its value and importance.
就我而言,我同意這個(gè)基本概念,即空間探索可以為人類提供利益,而這些利益尚未得到充分理解。政府將國(guó)家預(yù)算用于諸如福利和收入再分配等緊迫問(wèn)題當(dāng)然很重要,但空間探索在不同領(lǐng)域造福于人類這一事實(shí)也證明了它的價(jià)值和重要性。
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